Do you remember my friend Ivy’s six sentence stories? I love this prompt and hope to participate more in the future. My first stories have been about a woman named Denise, and tonight, I continue with this fiction and her story.
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Squatting next to the mound that-might-be-a-grave in the fake-Prada lady’s garden thinking about past contentment on her father’s face, Denise remembered a rare Christmas when her dad was sober enough to take her and her sister to see Santa at the local mall.
The mall had seen better days; shops were closed, but they’d done a decent job of stringing lights and garland. To her six-year-old self, it was magical and the scattered closed store-fronts faded to background in light of the dome and throne that housed Santa.
Denise let her little sister walk through the fake snow to visit Santa before she did, anxious for her because Sam had always been fearful and shy, and Denise worried about Sam’s words which mostly got tangled instead of being understood.
Her feet hurt as she stood on tippie-toes, listening to what Sam might say and sign to Santa’s question of “And what would you like for Christmas, girl?”
“A real friend,” Sam answered and Denise knew she’d spend her life helping her sister make friends because special needs kids want friends as much as the rest of us do.
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This holiday season, let’s be swept away by the magic, by the joy of children and Santa. Let’s also remember that everybody is important, and that each of us has a story to tell, whether we live in a car or in a castle. All of us have been through more than we share, and all of our stories are important.
Let’s be thankful for our stories.
For each other.
For this crazy, beautiful, scary, confusing, messy, wonderful, amazing life.
For friends. I’m thankful for each of you and wish you laughter and love this season and always.
by Kristi Campbell
clark - what an excellent Six!
talk about creating a scene and pulling the reader into it!…. backwater shopping mall as a semi-Tolkian, half-western ghost Town… damn! nicely crafted and more, I trust from Denise and Sam in the future!
coolDecember 24, 2015 – 8:21 pm
Kristi Campbell - Why thank you, Sir. Truly.December 24, 2015 – 8:31 pm
clark - hey!! FRIST!December 24, 2015 – 8:21 pm
Kristi Campbell - FRIST indeed! Merry Christmas Eve, you!December 24, 2015 – 8:31 pm
Lizzi - DamnitDecember 24, 2015 – 8:37 pm
Kristi Campbell - LOL
Who posts and comments on Christmas anyway?December 27, 2015 – 2:09 am
Lizzi - IKR? No-life people with not-busy-enough ‘Real’…? (Oh, wait…)December 27, 2015 – 11:27 am
Kristi Campbell - Xactly.December 27, 2015 – 10:42 pm
Lizzi - :p Reckon next year might be a different kettle of fish *crosses fingers*December 28, 2015 – 4:08 am
Lizzi Rogers - This is gorgeous, and I love how you’ve used it for good, to get that ol’ world changing. Wonderful. And I’m very thankful for you, too. Merry, Happy Christmas <3December 25, 2015 – 1:34 am
Robin Kimber - Isn’t it strange tha children come out with words that no adult could have said better. Lonliness make us see thing more vividly. Wonderful post.December 26, 2015 – 5:22 am
Emily - I’m thankful for friendship too, including yours even though we still haven’t met IRL – some day!! In addition to your friendship, I am thankful for the important messages about empathy that you convey to the blogging community and beyond…happy new year Kristi!December 26, 2015 – 1:30 pm
Kristi Campbell - Emily – YES very please (as Tucker would say) to meeting IRL some day – sooner than later. I’m thankful for you, your friendship, wisdom, experience and voice. Happy happy new year to you and yours!!December 27, 2015 – 2:11 am
Ivy Walker - Really really beautiful.December 26, 2015 – 10:58 pm
My Inner Chick - ****everybody is important, and that each of us has a story to tell, whether we live in a car or in a castle****
Isn’t that the truth?
Once we realized this, the world will become so much sweeter.
Happy 2016 xxxxDecember 28, 2015 – 1:57 pm
Kristi Campbell - One at a time, right? Hope you had an amazing holiday Kim!January 3, 2016 – 4:32 pm
Tamara - I’m so thankful for my in person friends, and blogging friends, and those amazing ones that are both. Like you!
I love your fiction because I can see it all so clearly.December 28, 2015 – 9:38 pm
Kristi Campbell - I’m thankful for you too! Here’s to a wonderful 2016!January 3, 2016 – 4:33 pm
Nina - I really loved this and I hope you had a great Christmas.December 30, 2015 – 7:32 am
Kristi Campbell - Thanks, Nina! It was great, thank you. I hope you had a restful break and will have a fabulous 2016!January 3, 2016 – 4:33 pm
Innovo - Thank you for sharing such a powerful message with us!December 31, 2015 – 2:46 pm
Kristi Campbell - Thank you!January 3, 2016 – 4:34 pm
Chris Carter - Oh that just caught my breath and made me tear up! Sigh… Just beautiful, my friend.
I miss you so much and I really hope you had a fantastic holiday break!! Here’s to a NEW YEAR of our friendship, sweetie! I wish you ALL the very BEST this year… and always.January 4, 2016 – 1:29 am
Kristi Campbell - Aw thank you so so much, Chris!! I hope you had an amazing holiday as well. We went to Colorado and Tucker had a blast! We went tubing. I hope that you’re doing so so well. xoJanuary 5, 2016 – 8:18 pm
Allie - Sorry I’m so late! I kind of checked out for a couple of weeks, and now catching up with my girls. You did a really good job with this Kristi! I’m proud of you.January 4, 2016 – 9:59 pm
Kristi Campbell - I’m so so late, too. We just got back from Colorado on Thursday, then did Santa here, and all of the things. I’m proud to be your friend. Thank you.January 5, 2016 – 11:03 pm
marcia @Menopausalmom - This is wonderful! I hope your holidays were beautiful and peaceful and that maybe you finally had some time to pamper yourself! Love you!January 5, 2016 – 6:48 am
Kristi Campbell - I’m SO behind! Thank you thank you and I so very hope that your holidays were magical as well 🙂 Love YOU!!!January 5, 2016 – 11:09 pm